The Most Awesome Story Ever

[DeltaHat]

Hey all.
I created a new website and was wondering if you all could help me test it. My website is a user-generated choose-your-own-adventure story.

I have written the first page of the story, but need more pages. That is why I am not turning to you. Please help me by channeling your creativity into writing The Most Awesome Story Ever.

http://mostawesomesotry.appspot.com

Also, if you have any suggestions or usability problems, let me know so I can write them up.

Thanks so much for the help,
DeltaHat

[zorbak5044]

pretty good cept you should mix up the pages more if you can

[NamG]

Interesting idea, Delta.

[robotman]

sounts similar to the three word story
in the idea

[AmericansWeQueen]

Good Idea, just needs a lot more. Good description and I like the story line. Somewhere there needs to be an explanation of how the reader got to the island.

[rocketman1555]

he fell out of a boat ,

just make a page for that, isn't that the whole point of a book like this, make it like a flashback